Dalton_Reutlinger
First, figure out what type of editing you need: Copy, line, mechanical, substantive, developmental, manuscript, etc. Hopefully, its not editing you need, but simple proofreading.
Second, go over your own work. Look at things more from a substantive editing point of view. Especially chapter 1. If I have to power my way through chapter 1 to get to the good stuff, that story will likely be dropped. If your chapter 1 isn't that good, you may have to rewrite a lot of your beginning/early chapter to get a good starting chapter 1. And even if we ignore the rampant witch hunts in the 17th-ish century, promises of a "rare" combination of "magic" and "17th-18th century" isn't enough to get me to power through a horrible start. Make sure you're building suspense properly, and going straight into [an] action.
Third, use a grammar/spell checker.
If you think you did all that, feel free to ping me with your chapter 1, 2, and/or 3.