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Sally112425 thank you so much. I am willing to wait. Btw, this is fanfiction and it only had one chapter yet. But I had also a few fanfictions that I dropped, due to the reason I felt that my writing is not that good much less the story, and thus eventually been dropped from me. (Also suffered readers telling my story sucks, thus, my heart towards writing was fading. And I have not written a novel for a month, because of that reason.

Denigrate_Demon okay so I have read it and let me say this first. It is good. I will not say great or amazing because there are a few pointers which you only get after you start writing and all. In case you want, you can DM me on discord. Sally112425#1687
But trust me it is good and you should continue writing.

Denigrate_Demon
About your writing skills they are great. The most important part is that your story shouldn't seem to be distorted which it did not seem to me atleast. It was able to show the conversation between the man and the god and how he was ambitious but still able to realize his limits. So those two points were pretty clear.

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Sally112425 Finally, truly thank you, Even though my thanks might be bland. My heart is full of gratitude, I even thought my writing skill was bad. Thank you for pointing it out, I will surely not to disappoint you and continue writing this.

Denigrate_Demon perfect. In order to make the story a little more fascinating what you can do is ....btw this is just suggestion ok.

Denigrate_Demon
Do not write all three wishes in first chapter only. Start with him being born and then think that huh. I am here and then make him remember his first wish.

Do not continue the dialogue in first chapter. Show that he was asked by God about his three wishes and then directly he is born it might create a little curiosity.
This is purely my suggestion.
I am not demotivating or I am sorry if I offend you. As an author you have complete right on your story.
Also I am lazy to type so if you are unable to understand or the suggestion might be distorted I am sorry.

Denigrate_Demon I am completely okay. Because I have gone through this journey of being a worst to a good writer. And I know how important it is for someone to help you. I always had my Younger sister and my bestie reading and criticizing me so I could improve. Sometimes even my mom. Heheh. So I completely understand your stance. You can sure DM me and I will always do my best to help you out.

Sally112425 No, not at all. This suggestion helps me to be honest. As a noob author, I have a lot to work on, and your suggestions made it even easier for me. So why should I feel offended? Thank you, I will sure to add this, in the first chapter. Thanks

Sally112425 Sure, I will, thank you. For a stranger like me, you are willing to help, from my point of view, you are really a good person.

Denigrate_Demon perfect. Similarly you can let him go on with his life and slowly make him remember or come across his third and second wish. It will make readers curious. About what was the other wish and so on .......
If you need any other help. You can drop me a message anytime. I will be happy to help. And depending on your first chapter. I am sure with little writing you will be an amazing writer.
I have written a novel total of 145 chapters I guess. Even today when I read the first chapter and the last chapter I realise how big of a difference can 140+ chapters can create.
So the best way to hone your writing skills are to keep writing so you improve.
All the best and good luck with your writing endeavor.

Denigrate_Demon thanks a lot. I am blushing as well as really happy now. I understand how important it is for a writer to have a calm and clear mind. If my spending barely few minutes can help them...then why not.

Also if any other writer feels the same, they can DM me and I will try my best to read their book ahe help them a little. If you want to know if I am myself a good writer or not. Let me tell, no I am not a good writer. I also make gramattical mistakes but I know how to create curiosity or engage readers in the story. So anyone anytime can ask me for help. I will be happy.

Sally112425 Thank you so much. Now that you pointed it out, the essence of curiosity in the first chapter was missing. I really have not thought this to deep, I guess I have lots to work on. Thank you, I will surely dm you after I write more chapters.

Denigrate_Demon np sure. I will be waiting. Have a good one.

Agree that no one was born like a writer. Is a big deal to become a good one! Practise more and keep going!