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Let's swap reviews. It would be very helpful if you could give me some suggestion on were i could improve

      Title: The Guardian Of Darkness

      Link: https://m.webnovel.com/book/17505695605216105?bookId=17505695605216105&activeTab=

      Synopsis: Sekiguchi Shin 17 Years old student who transferred and perfected the transfer exam, has an overwhelming strength, magical energy, knowledge, and ability but he doesn't have any dream or goal to achieve therefore his sister gave him a Mission to find his Purpose and find himself surrounded by beautiful women who fell in love with him and great danger is about to fall at him.

      will he find his purpose? is it worth of trouble? or his ability was just given to him by accident.

      follow Shin's way of finding his goal.

        Someone can do a Review Swap with me?
        Title: Broken Lovers: Beautiful Witch Who Born Without A Heart
        Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/broken-lovers%3A-beautiful-witch-who-born-without-a-heart_17444143905909505
        Tags: Urban Romance, R-18, Revenge, Handsome Male Lead, Smart Female Lead, Doting Love Interest, Showbiz, Power Couple, Childcare, Sickly Characters
        Synopsis:
        "How Dare she? How dare she makes me feel this way!--" He inhaled sharply "Yet, she is the most beautiful Witch I have ever seen." The once calm Mr. President didn't even know this isn't the last time. But, the pure beginning.

        Same tragic past, different pain endure. One hid her suffering in her dark demons while the other exposed her broken sins. Two broken souls are the perfect combination of the most heartbreaking story. One cold-blooded lives with the purpose to seek revenge for the person who was involved in her mother's death. While another lives with a solid purpose to achieve her mother's past dream.

        As a result, the two sisters' agonizing shaped themselves by life itself. One is The Ice Maiden, or so how everyone called Zong Mayleen, is a truth to her own mystery. Nobody knows who she is or where she came from but one thing everyone has to know about her is; she has been in hell and back. Yet, something about her pretty smirk tells she is the boss down there too and a terrifying tycoon up there as well. Beware of Ice Maiden, she is heartless to every single living thing.

        Zong Ah Cy is Mayleen's younger sister, a beautiful piece of broken pottery. She is too emotional after the trauma of that night, she had spent most of her teens in the Mental facility. Wondering in the line of life and death. If someday between letting go and holding on her deepest pain, can she find herself again?

        In the end, both sisters didn't know their only purpose for breathing would be the bridge to experiment life like any other woman in their youth. Romance? knights in shining armor? Lies? Drama? Heartbreaking Love? Wealth and social class? Revenge?

        Are these two sisters prepare for the most torn way to experiment what deep inside their heart's desire? Or these two would shield themselves towards the shattered world they live in?

        Thanks!

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