melibias it's very good. There are some punctuation errors and some wording needs to be rearranged, otherwise it's good.
Proof reading and editing
Forbidden_Romance Thats my email Lizmelodi(arroba)icloud.com
melibias that email doesn't work.
Forbidden_Romance
Hi, I already checked my chapters for thrice and I finished editing my chapters today and I want to know whether I edited my novel correctly. So can you read my story and tell your opinion whether it's good to read and understand
https://m.webnovel.com/book/my-love-is-my-cure_19011503105928405
cutie1424 yes, I will take a look.
cutie1424 yes, I will take a look.
cutie1424 yes, I will take a look.
Forbidden_Romance No I will just email my first three chapters to you because my grammar sucks somehow 
Will that be okay for you...
https://www.webnovel.com/book/darq-book-of-magic_18435921405664705
its my first novel so any feedback is greatly appreciated!
cutie1424 yes, that will be fine.
CurlS8002@gmail.com
BB_Wolf I will take a look this evening.
melibias it's okay
Forbidden_Romance I sent you a mail please check on it 
Forbidden_Romance Hi. Can you also check mine. https://m.webnovel.com/book/happy-even-after_18911131605534505
I would really love to improve my story and be greatful to for the help.
lala_sanara I will look at it.
Forbidden_Romance Thank you. Please do tell me what's need to improve and if you could give some reviews too. I greatly appreciated it.
Hi. I was wondering if you got the chance to read my book. I did not get a reply back. Please I am still hoping that you will give it a try and give me a feedback or even a review.
https://m.webnovel.com/book/i-dare-not-hope_18469969606952805
2 months later
Hi!!
I'm new here. I just found this page and I would love your help you are willing to offer with proofreading. Am I late?
a year later
hey, can help me out please. my book is Your sweet presence. You can comment inthe chapter I will rectify my errors. Thanks in advance.