Lexi_Roberson THANK U for your feedback, i just read your story a few hours ago, your account's name's different so I didn't recogniseeee!!!! Okay, wow that's a hell of a novel, Ive been an animal welfare worker ever since I was younger, rescued too many animals, thank u for writing something like this, I would add it to my list and read it shortly, thank u soooo much.
Proof Reading/Reviews
I just started writing not that long ago, and would love some feedback. Here is the link
https://www.webnovel.com/book/supreme-demon-lord_18410961505573305/dream-world_49680474955636890
Lexi_Roberson
Here's mine! It improve a lot now but I want you to check it.
Title: Lumia: Other World
Link: How about you only read one chapter on mine then leave a review. You don't have to read the rest.
Title: Lumia: Other World
Link: https://www.google.com/amp/s/m.webnovel.com/amp/book/16777328005202205
Gaureeey THANK YOu for reading it and loving it as well. I do hope I'm doing a great job, unforuntunately the readers aren't letting me know to much. Haha. I am trying to read everyone's novels, but I have a few romance/Magical novels within my library along with yours. Right now I'm super busy with work,reviewing, and the writers workshop. I left you a review, I absolutely loved your book. I plan on reading more later. :) Yes my name is different lol. This was my username before I changed it, for privacy reasons. Again, thank you, and I think I left a review not for sure. I've been replying to all those I have. :)
midnight_bloom You are welcome! Just trying to do my part and help as much as I can! Happy writing and keep up the good work!
Gaureeey Which one do you like best lol? I did try to make it as realistic as possible. I was often sick by what was happening to the main character because that's how awful it is in real life. People usually brush it off, and I don't like that fact. So, I decided to do the next best thing I could, write about it, and I hope the readers understand that! :)
If you're still up imma drop mine haha started to write last Oct or Nov hehe. Hope you'll give me some pointers. It's my first time writing
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/18217212905745705?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4308455831
Littlepunnie definitely! I have trying to read everyone's novels! I have been having some issues with my mouth, but will hopefully get to back to reading and reviewing! Are you the username I talked to about my book The Moon Shines On Starlight lol?
Lexi_Roberson your id name looks familiar. Are you the one who I asked about an invite? For some issues I can't get in tho, maybe it's because of my internet connection.
hi guys,
i would like an honest review. here's the link.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/purushapura---the-land-where-women-don%27t-matter_18892222205463705
Littlepunnie ah yes, to the discord server? Ok, yes, ok it's called Popsical_Jellyfish Books. I tried putting your name but the username wasn't working. Is there anyway I can add you as a friend on discord, and invite you to the group?
vinthakadha I will do my best, as soon as my laptop turns on I'll add your book to my library
Littlepunnie https://discord.gg/JTynRxXt heres the link
nishidurani yes that's fine, that's what I go by or L. Roberson as well. Whichever you prefer.
Jay_Blu I left you a review.
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Ok, update: If I HAVEN'T reviewed your novel, please reply to this comment. I will just be reviewing them in the next couple of days. I will only be reading the first few paragraphs, many requests, and I am wanting to review them all! It seems more writers/ authors are commenting on these threads, so it will be harder to reply to everyone. Hopefully, in the afternoon, or early morning hours. If you get a review from a Popsicle Jellyfish, that is me. I can't keep replying to the forum comments, it is too much stress on me. I've got some schoolwork (doesn't take that much to do) BUT it is still stressful! So, if I leave a review, I will tell you on the comment that it is me as well! I've done my best to let yall know on here as well, and I will just have to tell you on the comments! Thank y'all so much! - Popsicle Jellyfish/L.Roberson
Edit: If you are interested in reviewing my novels as well (it doesn't matter, I did this to help you and not me, but if you WANT to, you can), you can let me know with a comment. This is not a review swap thread either. Another author did ask me for the links to my novels, and I gave them to them. If you are curious, don't be afraid to ask me! I know I said I wouldn't reply on here, but I got carried away lol. I figured out I could read it on my phone, and use my laptop to reply lol. Sometimes I wonder about my own self. Anyway, good luck authors! - Popsicle Jellyfish/L.Roberson
Littlepunnie I left you a review
vinthakadha left a review
phoenixhyperion I left a review for ya
Cassy_Ailele reviewed your book!
JD_Fincher left a review
Mel_Aniv left ya a review
Also, for the time being, after the last comment for reviewing, I can't review anymore, unfortunately! My schedule is now packed full! Thank you!
As I have stated, I, by no means expect any of you to review my novels, but there was a couple of authors asking me for the links. I do want to point out, this isn't exactly a review swap thread, but I don't feel like inboxing everyone when they can just get it from here, ya know? So, this is me being lazy. If you are interested, great, thank you so much. If not, that's ok, I will just be giving the links to my two novels below. Thank you to all who have asked! Like I have stated before, I only wanted to offer my help. This is by no means of me gaining anything. It's just some asking for help, and then those turning around and asking me for my novel links as well! I just wanted to state that! :)
Totally In Love: https://www.webnovel.com/book/totally-in-love-by-l.-roberson_18848271505278505
The Moon Shines On Starlight: https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-moon-shines-on-starlight_18854014805302305
Lexi_Roberson
Thanks!
Mel_Aniv No problem! Just trying to do my part, and help new writers like myself! It's tough getting feedback, because you don't know whether what you are writing is good or not! Especially from the readers!
Lexi_Roberson
Yeah I agree
Lexi_Roberson Here's mine http://wbnv.in/a/62L2DpH it's still in the processing though
If you’re interested in a cunning, anti-protagonist mc, Destined Sovereign (link: https://m.webnovel.com/book/19047117806211105) is for you. An eastern fantasy genre packed with adventures, less annoying young masters (I’ll try my best), and full-action to avoid making the story boring. No heavy info dump, no overwriting, no underwriting, just exactly to enjoy and be immersed in the story. Make sure to check it out!
(If u have time to spare, I’ll appreciate a review or a note. Thanks a bunch!
Title: Gambit of the Living Weapon
Genre: Fantasy, Action, Comedy, Adventure, Drama
Synopsis: Young girl gets teleported to a fantasy land where she needs to deal with monsters, demons, dragons, and crazy mages in order to survive and find her way home.
There is a lot of focus on action, comedy and character development.
No systems or anything like that thought, just pure fantasy adventure.
Lexi_Roberson ok thank you
Can you review my book ...
I really want to know whether my writing style is good or not and if it's not good please help me to improve my standards of writing.
https://m.webnovel.com/book/my-love-is-my-cure_19011503105928405
This is a thriller and it has a slow romance and I hope you will help me by criticizing my novel
Lexi_Roberson i completely understand do not worry!!! Im currently on a reading spree too! can u resend the link of ur second novel because I forgot to add it to my library and I cant find it now!! THank u so much, both the concepts are equally as intriguing so id loveeeee to read!!!
Gaureeey thank you lol! Still in the process of reading books! I actually made a comment on here with the links, it shouldn't be that far ahead!
Gaureeey thank you lol! Still in the process of reading books! I actually made a comment on here with the links, it shouldn't be that far ahead!
Gaureeey thank you lol! Still in the process of reading books! I actually made a comment on here with the links, it shouldn't be that far ahead!
Lexi_Roberson thanks. i will check.
Lexi_Roberson under what name? i can't find it. thanks.
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Lexi_Roberson HEHE lol, good readers make great authors! all the best looking forward to your suggestions honesltlyyyysyys but just incase... here is my link if I go offline for a couple of days
3 Hours- A Gamble of Time.
C0VERING VARIOUS GENRES BUT MAINLY (SCI-FI ROMANCE)
https://www.webnovel.com/book/3-hours---a-gamble-of-time._18404695405551305
Synopsis-
Dave Dalton, an aspiring physicist, loses his fiancé who he treasured dearly. Plagued by his past and memories of her, he attempts to go back in time to protect her, but his battle is against his irreversible fate. Would nature accept this reverse or will his situation remain an inevitable mess?
IT WOULD MEAN A LOT IF YOU COULD DROP UR HONEST REVIEWS ON THIS APP OR via INSTAGRAM DMs @Gaureeey
wouldn't mind reverting the favour!