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Hi guys,
How are you? I hope you're doing well. I'm here to asks for your help in improving my novel. Suggestion or Feedback? I really need it to motivate more in writing. I know you experience, what I've been right now. I want a good reader who can communicate to an Authors what's on his/her thoughts.
I hope you understand what I mean. 
please? But, I'm not forcing you to do it. It's on you, of you read this. I'm just a newbie writer... Thank you in advance..
Here's the link of my story...