Wondering if anyone here can help me by proofreading my story and give me their honest opinions. I am hoping to find someone who loves to read and doesn't mind helping me make the story better. The story is about a teenage girl who bumps into one of the worst assassins in Canada. She ends up being kidnapped but not for reasons she believed. After certain situations she finds herself confused about her feeling but this only leads to her being caught in the middle of one of the worst gang wars in history. If anyone can help me out I would appreciate it.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-criminal-who-stole-my-heart_19724239005052505
New book in need of proofreading and opinions