kuhaku_sora it was a good read. But I'd suggest cutting up the first chapter in pieces. But as I said, I really liked this story, so good job

Nr_Yet1208 I READ every book I reviewed don’t slander me pls 🙃.
And about the same review Its my usual review that I use whenever i review 🤦‍♀️🤷‍♀️

    TheZombieAuthor Done the story is interesting but you need to edit and correct mistakes before publishing but I really loved it
    Looking forward to more chapters
    Oh and tell m what you think of mine please

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      TheZombieAuthor Done the story is interesting but you need to edit and correct mistakes before publishing but I really loved it
      Looking forward to more chapters
      Oh and tell m what you think of mine please

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