Prikkrang

Hi! I don't have the means nor the time to engage in a partnership with an editor at the moment, but I'll remember your offer— if need be—when I do have them. Plus, I don't really know you for now.

Thank you for taking an interest in my work (assuming you read it).

      MimiTea I’d appreciate any support, thanks! I’ve been on summer break from classes, so I have a lot of time to do stuff. I just thought it would be fun to read people’s stories and help them out with critiques.

          Epyonnn Alright! I added your NPC novel to my library and I'll start reading it. Expect a review either today or tomorrow :)

            Jo_J haha... I'm a little confused at what you're saying, but I already promised anyone who critiques my novel to give an equally honest, detailed review in return or 3 days' worth of powerstones if they have enough reviews. :)

                Epyonnn Hello, I liked the way you gave a review. I need your help with my first ever novel, cuz I am not getting any reviews and I don't know whether I should continue that novel or make some changes in the plot.

                Name: Mysterious Destiny of Us
                Genre: Fantasy Romance, time travel
                Synopsis:
                She said,
                "Fate is nothing but a question which the Deity throws, the answer to it is the choices we make..."
                He asked,
                "Then what about Destiny??"
                .....
                Simple minded, focused, a bit nerdy Su Yeon's life changes slowly but mysteriously when she join hands with a Doctor who is also a part of underworld and her life gets tangled with someone whom she never expected. Will she choose this life over her simple and stable life or may be she is destined to it??
                .
                .
                Excerpt 1:
                "I don't know anything else! From now on you are my Girlfriend and that is final! We will keep it secret, I will not disturb you and wait for you so you can pursue your career. But you will always be mine!"
                Excerpt 2:
                He was standing in the corner, looking at a girl who was enjoying with her colleagues, for whom he was waiting for more than 4 years. he whispered, "I think its enough of waiting now, it's time for us to be together. Little Bunny, will you accept me this time?"
                Book Link: https://m.webnovel.com/book/mysterious-destiny-of-us_20101912606657405
                Any criticism is accepted as I don't know what readers thought about my novel.

                    MimiTea

                    I am trying to be fair with people who spend their times reading our not perfect texts ;)

                    @Epyonnn you really doing a great job, man.

                        Jo_J I see... but I don’t understand since I’m already doing it? I never said I wasn’t going to do it 🤔 and promised from the beginning. I’m not a scammer or cheater, if that’s what you’re getting at... 😰

                            Epyonnn Hey! I just finished the first 10 chapters of your book, and I will say I will be keeping in my library ❤️

                            Now, for my review, I would like to give you two choices because I wrote a lot of detailed notes that are not sugarcoated at all. The first option is to get the non-sugarcoated version with my direct, honest thoughts. The second option is a less direct but still honest approach, but it might take me a little longer to write up. What do you think?

                              modestbaddie Hey your novel seems interesting and it's totally my type! Historical timetravel romance! I have added it to my library and I am currently reading it so I will post the review soon! I hope you will do the same with my book since my genre is also fantasy romance!!!

                                  I wish to thank @Yoan_Roturier for this great idea.
                                  I always post lots of pointers in the text when I read. Inconcistencies, moods, suggestions ans such. In review swap, I always feel disappointed that people don't take time to do the same.

                                  So here I am: I am not harsh, but honest in my reviews. Being a published author (in France), I've gone through the editing process with much suffering and consternation. But I had to admit that it helped. In the end, my novel is better now than it was before the editor clove though it with a two handed axe :D

                                  So I'm willing to share what I learn. And please, I'd be super happy if someone was willing to do the same on my easy going romances. I've got plenty, take a pick, and don't be shy.
                                  https://www.webnovel.com/book/in-another-life_18770877206104505 -> modern romance, sweet and short.
                                  https://www.webnovel.com/book/stage-fright_19074257706310705 -> modern again, featuring a 'famous' actor, a divorce, a little angst
                                  https://www.webnovel.com/book/god's-gift_18770877105939205 -> modern setting, more angst
                                  https://www.webnovel.com/book/tristan-and-isolde_18696695205627305 -> historical, my own take about Tristan and Isolde.

                                  I'm waiting for someone who needs a honest review to pop by. Cheers to all !

                                    Let's review swap, I am new to this so please educate me, please state you honest reviews,
                                    Genre: Fantasy
                                    https://www.webnovel.com/book/exiled_20402580006132605
                                    “In a place where gods live there is a ranking that can distinguish your authority, a rising god named Alvis, was a newly formed god of Strategy, formed 230 year, however being newly formed he has ranked high-silver, thanks to his expertise, being able to step within top-silver, made other gods wary of his existence, but unable to do anything because of the heavenly pledge,
                                    During his 250th anniversary, because of this a phoenix dropped by a golden scroll saying Alvis is to be promoted to Mid-Class, a Class where you will be rewarded with your own planet, which made others extremely wary of him and other started making speculation of him leaching of gods of higher ranking,
                                    with his position being at risk, as soon as Alvis received his new badge a planet was transported to him, Type 1653-Earth, a place where there are living beings are able to survive, he can change the conditions, the information or create creatures that can adopt and to the circumstances of the planet, as soon as this info was given to him he started reshape it into a game like world.”

                                    Let's swap reviews and support each other!!
                                    Book Name- LOVE ME HARDER, MR. FU
                                    Genre- Contemporary Romance
                                    Author- Xia_Xia89
                                    Book Link- https://www.webnovel.com/book/18680472505563905
                                    Synopsis- “Love never dies
                                    only the feeling fades”

                                    ❃.✮:▹　◃:✮.❃❃.✮:▹　◃:✮.❃❃.✮:▹　◃:✮.❃

                                    Mo Shi Lian, 24 years old, a brilliant and successful woman in the field of fashion designing. The only daughter of the Mo family and also the next heir of Mo corp.
                                    Fu Zi Chen, 26 years old, the youngest Chairman of one of the world’s top companies, Fu International; and the sole heir of Fu's household. The richest and most eligible bachelor in entire China. Known for his cold and ruthless personality.

                                    ⋇⋆✦⋆⋇　 ‧͙⁺˚･༓☾　☽༓･˚⁺‧͙ ⋇⋆✦⋆⋇　

                                    A business corporation with an unknown hidden motive between them. What will happen when the fire ignites when the two comes closer? Witness their hot romantic love story and how the male lead chases before our female lead.

                                    .・゜゜・.・゜゜・.・゜゜・.・゜゜・.・゜゜・

                                    After studying abroad for 5 years, Mo Shi Lian came back to take the charge of her father’s business after getting an emergency call from her father. Their company is in debt and only Shi Lian is the solution to resolve it but the path to success isn’t always easy. Her two cousins, Cai Li and Yin Zhen are the puppets of their mother and try to make the work difficult for our female lead for the greed to acquire Mo family share.

                                    .・゜゜・.・゜゜・.・゜゜・.・゜゜・.・゜゜・

                                    A one-night stand makes her feel nothing for love. She slept with a man she doesn’t know before coming to China.

                                    Two months later, when she joins hands with the Fu company, her life changed drastically. The man she slept with is none other than Fu Zi Chen, the Chairman of Fu Company. He remembered her and always kept thinking about her no matter how hard he tries not to. He was agitated when she refuses to recognize her but smirks, “this is going to be interesting.”

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