In terrible need of an editor.
mud
Poche You could try writing in your native language. Who knows maybe qidian might offer an English translator who speaks your language one day. Its always best to plan ahead. You don't want to wait till it happens to start your story.
If you're still need some help on editing and proofreading, I'll be happy to help.
Lord_Meh_Meh that would be a very roundabout way of publishing.
mud7 Does it sound extreme? Makes sense in my crazy mind
Lord_Meh_Meh not extreme, but the problem is with user base and audience