Hi, I’m a new author and I’m looking for some constructive feedback on my novel. It’s called “Mystery in the Whispering Grove” and it’s a fantasy novel with a hint of adventure, action, mystery, and romance.
It’s about Aria and Theo, two chosen Keepers who have to master the elemental powers of Earth, Air, Water, and Fire to protect the ancient Whispering Grove from a dark threat. Along the way, they discover the secrets of light and shadow, truth and illusion, and their own destiny.
If you enjoy stories with magic, mystery, and some adventure, you’ll love this novel. And if you don’t, I’d still value your opinion on how I can improve my writing style and craft a better story.
You can read my novel here:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/mystery-of-the-whispering-grove_27706412300716305

Please read it and let me know what you think.
Thank you for your time and support. I look forward to hearing from you soon. 😊

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    Here's mine

    Novel link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-adventures-of-aubert_28251844708995405
    Genre: Action-Fantasy, Action, Fantasy
    Status: Ongoing

    Synopsis:
    In the enchanting tapestry of Sylvestria, a realm where the echoes of magic harmonize with the hum of cutting-edge technology, a kaleidoscope of civilizations flourishes across breathtaking landscapes. From the ethereal peaks of Celestria to the unyielding Frostheim amidst icy expanses, the vibrant tapestry of Verdant Haven in the lush plains, the dazzling Lumina Falls cascading in the southeast, to the heat-forged resilience of Ember Citadel in the blistering desert—the world unfolds as a mesmerizing blend of awe-inspiring wonders.

    Within this realm, Aubert Réel, an unsuspecting resident, recently unveils the dormant powers of magic coursing through his veins. Embark on an enthralling odyssey as Aubert navigates the labyrinthine path toward greatness, where every step unveils secrets, and every spell cast reshapes the very fabric of his destiny.

    In a world teeming with marvels and mysteries, Aubert Réel's journey is a spellbinding fusion of magic, technology, and the inexorable pursuit of his extraordinary legacy.

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      eudine I'm done fam. Consider spreading mine while I spread yours.

          Hello readers and writers😊.

          I will be glad to meet you, read each other and help each other! 📙 My book: In My Eyes the Pain of the Whole World.
          https://m.webnovel.com/book/in-my-eyes-the-pain-of-the-whole-world_28416178808866105

          A dark world of fantasy, adventure, true friendship and an unconventional view of the world. If you like to think and reflect, then my book is for you.

          Let's get !

          Honest reading of the book, review and comments. If so, then write to me 😊

            ReWorld: The DwarfCat-earedElf
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            If you're interested in a Female MC - Fun Fantasy - Adventure Story, please give this novel a read.

            Thanks a lot!!!

              Title: Surrounded By Main Characters, I Was the Real Main Character All Along

              Genre: Adventure, Action, Comedy

              Synopsis: The Qilin's Descendant that stops the destruction of the world at the hands of the Four Evil Omens with the Four Sacred Beast Guardians.

              The Vampire Princess that prevents the Blood Lord from a war with the humans.

              The Onmyoji Genius who stops the evil demons from invading the world.

              I am none of these people. I am the friend character of these three protagonists and this is my story.

              Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/surrounded-by-main-characters-i-was-the-real-main-character-all-along_28310047400393905

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                Era of Players: Death God

                After the mana storm 700 years ago.

                Gaïa transformed into something similar to a game. Stat, skill, level, item, etc. People began to see the status window and received Class during their awakening.

                Welcome to the Era of Players where anyone can embark on the journey of greatness but only the truly capable one can claim the throne.

                Tags: Action, Adventure, System..

                Links: https://m.webnovel.com/book/era-of-players-death-god_28535421400592605

                I'm open for a review swap and available as well.

                  Hi... If anyone interested in Female MC - Fun Fantasy Adventure Story, please give this book a read.
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                  If you're interested in Action Adventure - Drark Fantasy Story, please give this book a read too.
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                  I hope you can consider adding it to your collection... Thanks a lot!!!

                    📚 Exciting News! 📚

                    Introducing THE DEVIA, an unforgettable journey into a world of fantasy. Get ready to embark on an adventure that will make your heart beat.

                    🌟 Key Features:

                    • Intriguing Power System.
                    • Plot Twists.
                    • A long journey.
                    • Lots of encounters.
                    • Extraordinary Characters.
                    • Well-crafted lore and world building.

                    📖 Description:
                    "Maybe the easiest approach is to make that building collapse on top of it."
                    "But that's a damn skyscraper, Joachim!"

                    PLOT:

                    Fresh from university with an engineering degree and a promising career in the capital, Joachim’s world turns nightmarish in an instant.

                    Chaos unravels when the apocalypse descends without warning. Followed by cataclysmic events that destroy the city.

                    After having lost consciousness, he wakes up but into a horrifying new reality: diabolical creatures roam the streets, preying on and devouring the living. But monsters aren’t the sole dangers around him.

                    The city he knew has transformed into a wild, lethal landscape where skyscraper—sized trees loom like behemoths, and deadly flora claims the concrete jungle.

                    In this alien world, Joachim discovers a stunning truth about himself — a mysterious power has awakened within him. With survival hanging by a thread, he must harness this newfound strength and face the horrors that await.

                    Yet, as he fights for survival, three factions emerge among the survivors, and not all of their intentions are noble.

                    But is the quest for power truly their driving force? Or is there something lurking beneath the surface that prompts them to wage war on the nearby settlements?

                    RELEASE SCHEDULE:

                    Chapters around 1500 words released daily, with an additional 50 Privilege Chapters ready to be released upon contract acquisition.

                    TAGS: #Magic-Abilities #Clones #Apocalypse #Devasted World #Foreign Races #Group Survival #Fantasy #Western lore inspired #Technological/Magical System

                    📚 Available Now on Webnovel:

                    Happy reading!

                    -PilgrimJagger
                    Author of BIOLOGICAL SUPER COMPUTER SYSTEM & THE DEVIA

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