Saint_Grey
Hello my name is Brandon Gould I would like to do a review swap with you
I am aware of the grammer and the spelling. If you could tell me how to imporove my story and any advice on being a better writer
The link and summery to my story are below
https://www.webnovel.com/book/arran-ember-the-last-of-the-dra'ghoul-bloodline_20065626606216405

850 years have passed since Zargorwarths defeat and the Vermillion Empires sudden surge in power over the Multiverse. Victor Silvertounge the last of the Guardians of Light, stood overseeing the balance to ensure that it did not fall into the darkness.
Victor could feel a change coming soon, the balance had been shifting and he did not know why but could sense that a Dra’ghoul was about to be born the first one since Draco Dra’ghoul
Emma Silvertounge a Syeer far stronger than any other seen before while only at the young age of sixteen walked pieces of her crimson hair fell in front of her sea-blue eyes and her freckled checks
“ Father, Who is Lupine Riddle ?” She asked Victor froze all time stood still, “ My child. Who told you about him? Victor said slowly his voice trembling with fear
Emma replied “ No one I had a dream and his name popped into my head as did Angel born and Wolfkin. What do they mean?”
Victor did not respond for a moment “ Tell me Emma did you see a Sword of Crimson Fire, a Spear of Golden Light, and an Ax with a wolf's head engraved on the hilt?”
She nodded slowly Victor sighed “ I feared as much. One last question was there a child with a dragon tattoo on his right arm?”
Emma nodded Victor refined from cursing “ my child it would seem that you are somehow linked with this new Dra’ghoul and those you saw in your vision. Do you know where he will be born?”
Emma replied, “ Haven Valley his mother Ashi Ember was just pronounced pregnant.”
Victor picked up his staff and said “ good then we will go and live in Haven Valley post haste.” Emma replied, “ but what about the balance?” Victor paused and said “ There is nothing I can do to prevent what will happen. The Balance will fall to darkness if I am here or not.
Victor turned to Emma who was looking out at the ever-expanding Space-Time Contium the images of her vision burned into her mind never to leave.
Victor placed a hand on her shoulder "We must leave post-haste the sooner we can get to the mother the better."

Emma nodded before they left she went and packed a medium sized bag with cloths, a leather bond book named Tales of Tylingariea by Damion Vixen Dorima and secered a silver blaclet onto her right wrist with a loud click the braclet clamped around her wrist buzzing and turning a dark blue..


she picked up her bag and meet Victer in front of a massive green portal that lead to the Haven. Taking one last look back at the Bridge of Reality Emma walked into the portal and the Wheels of Destiny for her and others were set into motionps

      Title: Escape From Paradise

      Link: https://m.webnovel.com/book/escape-from-paradise_20802880806154105

      Genre: Science Fiction, Action, Mystery, Adventure

      Short synopsis: God is dead and the tears of the citizens of Paradise won't be enough to wash away the blood.
      Mwene, a gifted mechanic, believes his long lost father is the cause of this earth shattering revelation. His search for answers tangles him up in a journey to the edge of the galaxy, with the world government on his tail, where he'll find answers to god, reality and most importantly, himself.

      I'm interested in a review swap. I would prefer sci-fi of any kind but I'm open to any genre. I'm not really picky.

        Web Novel Novel Ask