Esmoriz

Chizaru

Alstash

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            Synopsis

            [WARNING: MATURE CONTENT]

            From birth to him being seven years old, Osmond ward knew only about his village. He thought that the world was beautiful and one day he will venture into the unknown and see it for himself.

            It all changed on that day.

            Orcs and goblins and ogres flowed. They plundered, raped and feasted.

            On that day he witnessed nightmares in life.

            Orphaned and powerless, he was saved by a stranger. A man to whom he was forced upon.

            What will Osmond ward seek now?.

            Author's note:

            I am a non native English speaker.

            This is my first work. I wanted a story with non op characters and real stakes.

            I support all forms of constructive criticism and i hope you will enjoy my work.

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