@Violet_Ivory It did rub you the wrong way twice, didn't it? Sorry I didn't mean to be mean the second time.

First of all, you’re very talented. If you learn how to go with the flow of this platform, you’ll make a name for yourself. But if you’re writing because it’s something you want to do as a hobby and not make money out of it, then by all means ignore the rest of this newsletter.
-Revise your synopsis. Separate yourself as a writer from the synopsis of the story. Instead, add your thoughts in a review of your own story and what readers should expect, and give it 5 stars while you’re at it. It boosts confidence.
-Change your cover into something anime, ML readers love to see anime girls, you don’t have the romance tag so maybe a powerful guy with blood stains, etc…
-Instead of notes in the chapter, keep them in the writer’s note dedicated place. Why? Why not?
-Consider adding romance into your story and tagging it. Why? More readers.
That was what I put together quickly for you, but if you have the patience to update 2 chaps a day for a long time (which you easily could since it’s an adventure) then you’ll make it big times in here.

    MerrySweet ye no it’s more of a hobby, but gahdayum does it feel all warm and fuzzy when someone reads your work and likes it. Like bro, you gon’ make me cry. The anime book cover thing is so tru tho lmfaooo.

    But like 2 chapters a day, you tryna kill me? HOLY what is this grind you’re on, mad respect if your standards and expectations are that high, but I can barely formulate 2 words together in a day.

    But like thanks for reading, your review made my day. If you decide to read another chapter, give me a comment to let me know you’re reading or whatever. I’ll give you a 🍪 or something.

      MerrySweet oh and the not putting my end notes in the authors note thing is cuz I don’t think you can reply to that specifically. I sometimes write some silly joke, so a simple lol will give me the validation I never got as a child... This is a joke but ye I like it when I see people enjoy my stuff

        Akemi_Kyoshi I’m up for a review swap, but don’t give me some bitch ass review, like I be putting my heart and soul into these reviews and chapters and people hit me with the “huh duh, good story, I likey and recommend” and then they leave it at that. Drives me insane
        https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/24044347206708705?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4314828110

            Violet_Ivory
            Lol, alright. I'll read through it then give my review. When I'm done I will post my own link

                Ehm, is there a lady in the crowd? Would love to get a review from my actual targeted audience :')

                  Violet_Ivory Yeah. I'm down for that...
                  https://m.webnovel.com/book/god-ash_24571391405017605

                  Also, I'd like for your review and comment to be as honest as possible. If you don't like the book, or if there is something you want to criticize, then do so without hesitation. I really don't want the regular you-know-what shitty reviews. If you think it's not your cup of tea, then you can just ignore this. Thanks...

                      Akemi_Kyoshi Yeah. I'm down for that...
                      https://m.webnovel.com/book/god-ash_24571391405017605

                      Also, I'd like for your review and comment to be as honest as possible. If you don't like the book, or if there is something you want to criticize, then do so without hesitation. I really don't want the regular you-know-what shitty reviews. If you think it's not your cup of tea, then you can just ignore this. Thanks...

                          GMSJakers Yeah. I'm down for that...
                          https://m.webnovel.com/book/god-ash_24571391405017605

                          Also, I'd like for your review and comment to be as honest as possible. If you don't like the book, or if there is something you want to criticize, then do so without hesitation. I really don't want the regular you-know-what shitty reviews. If you think it's not your cup of tea, then you can just ignore this. Thanks...

                              hibiscus_lamp Yeah. I'm down for that...
                              https://m.webnovel.com/book/god-ash_24571391405017605

                              Also, I'd like for your review and comment to be as honest as possible. If you don't like the book, or if there is something you want to criticize, then do so without hesitation. I really don't want the regular you-know-what shitty reviews. If you think it's not your cup of tea, then you can just ignore this. Thanks...

                                  0Mashroom Yeah. I'm down for that...
                                  https://m.webnovel.com/book/god-ash_24571391405017605

                                  Also, I'd like for your review and comment to be as honest as possible. If you don't like the book, or if there is something you want to criticize, then do so without hesitation. I really don't want the regular you-know-what shitty reviews. If you think it's not your cup of tea, then you can just ignore this. Thanks...

                                      Biva Yeah. I'm down for that...
                                      https://m.webnovel.com/book/god-ash_24571391405017605

                                      Also, I'd like for your review and comment to be as honest as possible. If you don't like the book, or if there is something you want to criticize, then do so without hesitation. I really don't want the regular you-know-what shitty reviews. If you think it's not your cup of tea, then you can just ignore this. Thanks...

                                          SefaAYNA Yeah. I'm down for that...
                                          https://m.webnovel.com/book/god-ash_24571391405017605

                                          Also, I'd like for your review and comment to be as honest as possible. If you don't like the book, or if there is something you want to criticize, then do so without hesitation. I really don't want the regular you-know-what shitty reviews. If you think it's not your cup of tea, then you can just ignore this. Thanks...

                                              Akemi_Kyoshi Seen👍
                                              I'm going to do mine now, but mind you, I will be as honest as possible, and won't just write what you want to hear.

                                                  hibiscus_lamp I just checked again bro. I didn't see a review. Check again, and If you don't see, then can you do it again, please?
                                                  Also, be as honest as possible with me. If you don't like it, or think I can do better, be transparent and say what you feel. Thanks 🤗

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