ShoeInk
Sorry for not leaving a proper review on WN, I read the 1st ch, skimmed till 5 and honestly saw a lot of good stuff.
Stuff that deserve 5 star: quality of writing and premise.
The character was great, but the first ch had tooo much exposition about him. He explains a lot of things about his personality and hobbies. Though he does jokes about it in the end, saying he's just a normal dude, which i liked a lot.
If i was a pretentious prick, I would've said that the joke implies for something deeper about the character. As if his over-explanation of himself was all but a ruse, and at the end of the day and Mc just doesn't give a fuck (especially with the hikitani icon you have).
But his actions subvert his words, with how he reveals to his readers about the location of his school. This shows that deep inside, MC wants something more from his life. He wants attention and love and something... genuine...
Buuttt, Idk. I'm merely someone who wants 5 stars (and for some reason, you gave me 4.2 even though I explicitly hinted that I just wanted a five star and a cool quote. I added later that you can give criticism but please be aware that its possible to just press 5 stars on everything, but noooo.)
PS: you can rewrite the review but with 5 stars, I don't mind it. plsplspls uwuwuuwuw