Bithiah_ still reading dear! Will enjoy every bit.. i loved the opening and the chemistry between mom and the little angel.

      UelUel I just got done reviewing your's! What a fun story. The character's friendship feels so real!

          @Joshan_Jo Sure thing! I'm interested in a swap. I will start reading tonight before bed, and will continue reading tomorrow and then leave you feedback after work. =)

            Bithiah_ hi!!
            I just did a review. I am sad that you haven't focused on promoting your story!!! It's such a good story! Please promote more!!
            I loved the story and left a review.
            I left a few suggestions for you. I wish you would stop writing for now, and fix a few problems. let me give you some ideas if you don't mind:

            1. use Grammarly to catch typos on the fly.
            2. Sometimes you don't use punctuatiton and a single sentence runs for several lines. This can hurt the reading experience. But don't worry; Grammarly is a fantastic tool for catching this kind of problem.
            3. I believe, you need to give some attention to the flashbacks of the characters. You can spend more time on them and expand. I have left a long note on a chapter comment. That can be a general guidance for the rest of the novel. Why? Flashback is an amazing tool. If used cleverly, the readers will love your story more, but if you do not use it correctly, your story will lose its charm.
              Always devote your time when you are crafting flashbacks. It's a weapon; you can use it to tie loose ends, or you can use it to invoke strong emotion, and you can do many more!!!
              https://writetosellyourbook.com/the-5-rules-of-writing-effective-flashbacks/

            I have ranted too much. I am not even a good writer myself, yet I dared to give you advice....just take it as friendly advice. This is how we help each other improve.
            Please, don't mind...these are just thoughts... Cheers.

                @Joshan_Jo Just left you a review! Very well written author! I have it added to my collection for more reading later! Love the two leads <3

                  LotusLin
                  Thanks, I too liked your novel and reading it. Will post a review as soon as I am done

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