Hello! I'm a new author here.
I currently working on my book called,
Crescent Veil : Chronicles of Intrigue
https://m.webnovel.com/book/crescent-veil-chronicles-of-intrigue_26674737806125605

The genre is adventure, mystery, and magic.
Lord of Mystery is my favorite book and I took quite inspiration from that.
I hope you guys could try to read my book when you have time.
I want a chapter comment instead of review. But if you leave review much appreciate it. I have 5 chapter currently, if you do all 5. I'll also do all your first 5 chapters.
Thank you🍀

    Hello, there my, old and prospective author friends!!!
    I have a finished book waiting for review from the New Friends:
    https://www.webnovel.com/book/tom-in-an-rpg-world-book-one---a-dystopian-prelude_27234960406111505
    And this is the new book that awaits reviews and comments and collections from everyone:
    https://www.webnovel.com/book/strange-tales-of-a-little-mystic-book-one_27462978606833505
    If you help me, I will help you too!!!

    Bakkymee Review done my friend...the story was so interesting but I sincerely suggest you use Grammarly. You can install it on chrome, firefox, and Edge. This is a must-have too for writers.

        Zeena_Zoeloe Hey!! I have given a review...but let me ask you, my dear! Are you going to update the story regularly?
        It's such a good read!! If you don't, I will be disappointed. Can I ask why haven't you been updating regularly?
        If it's writer's block...then the only way you can get through this is to keep writing even if you don't want to. Then start over.
        I have done this so many times. But if you don't know what to write next - then first think about the ending first.
        That's your goal. You want that ending to happen.
        So you can first divide the main skeleton of the story like this.

        1. Beginning.
        2. action.
        3. ending.
          We know how it began. Now you must know how it should end. Write that down.
          Now start adding a little bit of details every day. That's the outline!!! Once your outline is done. start expanding the ideas.
          Sorry, I have ranted a lot!

            Ninestar619_5803 before I do a review...i see you have a contract! but why haven't you been releasing any more of your story? i mean I want a contract so badly...but I have no luck. But you have the contract, right? So, why the delay in release?

              xish101
              I will tell you how I am slowly revising my story.

              1. first of all it was all about how to end my book. So, I quickly wrote down an outline.
              2. then I started putting up details.
              3. once my story was done. I began correcting according to the readers' advice.
              4. But the final touch is - sensory touch. What can my story show to my readers? This is imagery. Is there any scent in my story? the feelings from tongue or skin...taste or sensory feelings from touch etc.? Can my reader feel anything from my story?
                It's like adding more visuals, scent, taste, emotion, color, etc. in the environment of the story.

              I believe you can understand from here, what you can do more about your story, right?

              You can read my first chapter...I am currently updating its details. You will feel some changes. I added taste in the first scene where Tom is being thrown from the Rooftop...can you detect what the change of taste is? let me know there with comment. If you find it, you will understand what you need to change in your story too. I will keep giving you my thoughts slowly but first before you move to the 2nd season, make the first one complete, please.

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