I'd be willing to review swap with you, and don't worry about matching scores. I'd want your genuine input and view on the story just as I'd give yours.
The link to my story is here: Fallen Moon
And I'll try my best to read through and review your story as soon as possble

    Soniimarx

    Joseon Dynasty Fiction- Korean Fiction (this story is not related to the original history of the Joseon Dynasty).

    Vol 1

    Jang Mi, a talented chef who worked at Hotel Moonbich, suddenly sucked into a portal that open in front of the bus stop.

    Together with her friends, Jang Mi tried to escape from the portal but no avail. They did not come to help the hotel staff.

    So, Jang Mi, Ru Na also others were stranded in the 18th century Joseon Dynasty and then immediately arrested by Prime Minister Sung.

    Betrayal, rebellion and the struggle for the throne with a spice of romance, fantasy, drama and a little horror and action.

    Vol 2

    Jang Mi and the Crown Prince secretly escaped from the palace through the portal that Moonbich Hotel staff had first passed through. While they were running away, the palace was in chaos and a war broke out in it.

    Weiming and Sung Bin helped the soldiers attack the prime minister's men, they took out their ultimate move.

    In Seoul, Jang Mi asked Mr. Nam to give his blessing to her relationship with the Crown Prince, but it turned out that Mr. Nam has secretly set up Jang Mi with the CEO of Moonbich Hotel.

    This story is my first english novel, please give suggestions for this novel.

    If you like and enjoy this book, please send me power stone, gift and nice comments. I also wrote :

    ☆ An Introvert and Melancholic
    ☆ The Alpha VS The Beta
    ☆ Nine Tailed Fox and the actor

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        I've just done it!

        I really liked what you read!
        The only thing was that there were too many descriptions that made it difficult for me to process the more important details. But the imagery is vivid and well-written!

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          Hey Authors I will review your books and the books to my library please add my book to your library and
          please don't review my book but if you want to you can review it honestly I don't mind if you give it a 2 star .If you don't want to review it then that's fine but please add the book to your library and I will do the same to your books

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            Hey Authors I will review your books and the books to my library please add my book to your library and
            please don't review my book but if you want to you can review it honestly I don't mind if you give it a 2 star .If you don't want to review it then that's fine but please add the book to your library and I will do the same to your books

              [unknown] [unknown] [unknown]
              Hey Authors I will review your books and the books to my library please add my book to your library and
              please don't review my book but if you want to you can review it honestly I don't mind if you give it a 2 star .If you don't want to review it then that's fine but please add the book to your library and I will do the same to your books

                [unknown]
                Thank you so much. I'll work on the descriptions and stuff later on, so thank you again for the feedback. I dropped my review on your story earlier. I hope you like it.

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