[unknown] I have read yours and so far Due to the unusual usage of pronoun 'I' in Chapter II, I felt like that part is actually an annoying monologue of the actual mystery character/s of themselves. May I ask which of your character/s is/are narrating that chapter? Thank you.

    @chery_cabral

    huh, I just went back an reread what I wrote and I realized your right about how confusing it gets.
    I'll go back and edit that now. Thanks!

      [unknown] I have read yours and I felt like there are parts that actually conveys an annoying monologue of the actual mystery character/s of themselves. May I ask which of your character/s is/are literally talking/telling/narrating those lines/part? Thank you.

      [unknown] I have read yours and I felt like there are parts that actually conveys an annoying monologue of the actual mystery character/s of themselves. May I ask which of your character/s is/are literally talking/telling/narrating those lines/part? Thank you.

        Ak02 Let's swap: rating review, comments on five chapters and keep in your library for continued reading. Anyway, the more you comment earns us points, so nothing to lose

          @Jude_K_1656
          Reading your's now, its the first time I actually read a romance novel so its pretty fun. I'll get back and tell you later when I'm done with the review. Worth the read so far, will read more with the others later when I get back! Thanks!

          chery_cabral Yeah no problem! Chapter 2 is a music playlist for the character. It's not a part of the story, it was a like a little note from me the author. I wanted the readers to be able to feel the angsty vibes and themes for Charlotte's mood and aesthetic

            I'm looking for more readers and I'm willing to become one to your novel. I'm not looking for a fake five star review. I want honest opinions. I will not review your book if you didn't truly read at least 10 chapters of my book. I will be able to tell.

            Comments on individual chapters are something I'm willing to do in return also. I'll add your work to my Library if you add mine.

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            Thank you in advance!

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