Fateshaper_Riifty Hi, Fateshaper, I am reading your book. I wanted to leave a comment on your paragraphs but did not know if you know how to delete them yet so I will leave it here. Please try to split up some of your paragraphs. Most of them a too long and making them feel like a massive info dump. The story is interesting. Will leave a review once I finish reading it.

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