Hey TL, can you ask author? Ask him why the fck he always use same PLOT? Like tempest battlefield which already Broken as a novel, poor written, poor plot, poor loophole. Huh? Cant he make different plot and story? Mysterious teacher and technique. Same as always, SCHOOL'S life, POOR ROMANCE for hundreds chapter. Heck!!! Wtf is this shit, why AUTHOR ALWAYS WROTE THIS SAME PLOT AND SHIT. A naive kid romance? VRMMORPG?? Hell!! It is fine if only 50-100 Ch of VR thing. But it s been loong time until future. You think people so DUMB THAT THEY CANT TRACK HIS LOCATION VIA FUTURE TECHNOLOGY?? "He uses The helmet, so they cant track him"
HELLOOO, he was playing in NETCAFE, which obliously can be TRACKED. Not personal NET Helmet Tech. A future which have GUNDAM,STARSHIP, ROBOT, A.I ,LASER, TELEPORT ETC AND THEY CANT EVEN GODAMMNT TRACK HIM IN COMMON NET CAFE. HOW THE FCK IS THAT!? I dont know anymore what LOGIC author use. A common netcafe in far future can MASK his I.P for long time?? Seriously?? This is the most annoying thing from this novel, aside from romancesht. Beside if author want to mask MC location, just make a SUPER A.I plot. Which oblivously automatic masked it like Novel SUPREMESOLDIER. I understand that this is sequel of Tmp battlfld but dude can you make it different? Diff plot,diff story, diff inheritance. Well I know this is late suggestion ,because this novel almost complete. But at least in NEXT NOVEL please make some DIFF. Your 3 novel of yours have same plot,time and story.
TEMPEEST OF STELLAR WAR
