Megan_Immanuella Also, I'd like a real review that highlights the good points of my novel, while putting emphasis on the parts you feel I should improve on.
Paragraph and chapter comments
Demons_and_I ok I'm doing it now
Megan_Immanuella THANKS!!! 
Demons_and_I I've commented on thrthe prologue but still haven't seen yours.
Demons_and_I I've seen it now. Im gonna finish yours
Megan_Immanuella Thanks. I dropped a few chapter comments from chapters 1 to 5, so can I ask of you to do the same?
Demons_and_I Could you give me a review on this book still commenting on yours
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/25357471606989505?utm_
source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4319974613
Megan_Immanuella I haVE Given yours a review already....
Megan_Immanuella Okay. I thought it was the same book. I'll do a review of this one once you have given mine a review as well...
Same for me https://www.webnovel.com/book/halo-of-dreams_24398739606423105 As I need comments of feedback after chapter 21
5 days later
Am asking for comments in my novel but in specific chapters ,comment in these three (link below) only, both paragraph and chapter comment at least five comments (Paragraph and chapter each) in all three (nothing less) and I'll read five chapters of your novel and comment too! (at least ten)
P.S.: My novel is around 65 chapters so the comments should be in the three chapters i'll link below, just so to avoid confusion (don't go commenting on the first chapters (unless you want to) but the one posted below!)
https://www.webnovel.com/book/this-transmigration-seems-somewhat-strange..._23790626105212705/system-space-(arc-3)_68408261073763453###
https://www.webnovel.com/book/this-transmigration-seems-somewhat-strange..._23790626105212705/system-space-(arc-4)_68429520373347792###
https://www.webnovel.com/book/this-transmigration-seems-somewhat-strange..._23790626105212705/w2-once-upon-a-tail-(1)_68475906003361374###
11 days later
I think...you don't check it but I did on chapter 63...plz confirm about it...so we could move further...
Moonwriting
Sure thing, send your link! But since you only commented on one chapter, i'll comment on three of yours
Hey no worries......just follow me up on Wattpad and vote and comment ....on my ONC..book
And I'll shortly read reaming chapter too...
Just stay in touch and like and reply to my comments in your book
Hi kindly read my novel leave a review and add to library. Don't forget to leave comments please thank you. Will do the same for your novel.
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/25598501905368005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4311961292
Sure thing ....
Moonwriting
Done. I'm Emslover numbers and stuff (forgot lol)
....and I'm confused where it came from...thank you anyway...
Hi dear...I done a review of your book ..u can check it out...or let me know if you interested in an evaluation
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Moonwriting I'm interested with this! I will do 3 paragraphs comment/chap and review yours! I will add your novel into my library too... I will do para comment until chapter 17, since my novel just got 17 chap!
However as a newcomer I don't think I can give you evaluation for every 5 chapter :"
But if you don't mind please do it for me too, I would like an evaluation too, just not every 5 chapter, but overall evaluation! and English is not my first language, so please bear with it :"
This is the link : https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/25547186705213605?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4321740640