@Kittylovely Hi! Is the offer still standing? I'm willing to commit in

  • reading 10 chapters,
  • 5 paragraph comments in each chapter
  • 1 chapter comment
  • 1 review swap (after reading).

Let me know and I'll drop my link afterwards.

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      Kittylovely Done reading yours. Hope you'll return the same favour.

      On a personal note, I think you can flesh out your story a little bit more and ensure that all of the characters don't feel like only a one or two person exist. But I'll say, your character descriptions is pretty good.

          Here's my light novel if you would like to read / review!
          https://www.webnovel.com/book/dark-utopia_22759395006338705

          SYPNOSIS:
          Dark Utopia Discord server - https://discord.gg/pyt32npaGB
          An ordinary young man, who honed his sword, skilled against battles, only to be exposed to anguish. Longing for revenge, he had eventually placed himself inside the Divine Tower;

          yet little did he know, his life, and the future of the world would later be held in his own hands. This is Dark Utopia.
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