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vesnxx awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, I wish I had emojis to express myself, that is the energy I wish I had when I got my first rejection, and it was my first book ever to be seen, so I felt awful, and it is the same play I am working on here on web novel, Thank you because although the book isn't getting the view I want, it is my story and it is beautiful to me, and my family who are my biggest views always ask about how the story is going, that joy is worth so much sooooooo much so this energy is what I'll keep no matter how scary or tough the world get... There will always be rejections, criticism, and haters but Hey my mom, my dad my sisters and brothers and my best friends love the play so f**k it, I am not changing my play to a story because I believe it can become a beautiful play(someday) WOW I just typed this

    MansonFD7 hi, if you believe you deserve attention, then you might not get it, my dad told me "ruki you are good and you deserve the attention but let others find you and give you attention, let others praise you because you are good at what you are doing not because you deserve it... so I will read the book ouuuu it's two books might take a while

      iwo835 so it is obvious you are not bad, not bad at all... I love stories about gods, Zeus, Aphrodite, Hades you name it, it actually left me staring at the screen saying after chapter 5 I will sleep but I read your book till I ran out of battery... sorry I stopped commenting I got immersed in the book... I do not know why the views aren't much but hey you are good I mean you portrayed what you felt and it is good to affirm to yourself that you know where you are going with this story... I've noticed a good cover also attracts reads saying because I look at covers to know how creative the writer is... ( not saying my cover is good, in fact it is bleh the cover of my book) so get a good cover and I hope you believe in your book buuuuut if you still want to be 100% sure a professional should read it and tell because why not?

      PerkyPompous_Pixie uhmmm okay... so I did some research; advantages and the disadvantages annnnnd I am just gonna stick with this my little discussion swapping thingy whatever I think professionals can and will do that properly but if you still want me, I'd like to read your book if you'd like

        popular_ruki oh, it's alright if you don't want to. I prefer a two-way street so it did not feel like I'm taking advantage of your kindness. Thanks though for letting me know! Cheers!

          popular_ruki every book has its own beauty 😁😁😁 but i thought writting was hard...yesterday I finished myy first book...that end when you say goodbye to your characters...that is hard I swear 🤣🤣 you just keep your head up and be proud of your story it's yours and no one can take that away from you 😁❤

          I think what you're doing here, asking for other people's opinions while also being willing to try their stuff, is one big way to both get an estimate of where your quality is at and work on ways to improve it.

          That said, I wanted to at least take a look at your story before dropping a link to my own, but as someone else mentioned, the inkstone link doesn't take me to it, and I haven't been able to figure out how the people who posted reviews of it were able to find it.

          Anyway, since this does seem to have turned into a sharing thread, and you seem to be giving honest reviews (the best kind!), I thought I'd go ahead and give you mine:

          https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-princesses-luna_24003223306376205

          It involves five sister princesses in a world basically governed by the moon (and something is going wrong with the moon). The sisters fall across a decent spectrum of action princesses, with a shared sense of humor that has so far received positive reviews.

          I only have about 20 chapters so far, but I plan on releasing on a MWF basis.

          Rainbow420 be consistent, get to 50,000 words. Email Webnovel with your work. They’ll take some time to review it and get back to you. At least I’m pretty sure this is how it goes

          i do that one and half month ago, they don't know to me. How many times they need in this review process?

            @Rainbow420 You don't necessarily have to get to 50,000 words. They reached out to me on Wattpad. I only had 3 chapters written. Then I was told I needed 12,000 words total. Once I reached the threshold. I submitted my then 9 chapters for the screening process. I should be hearing back from them sometime next month. Just put out quality work and be as authentic as possible. Be different from what most are doing. If your book is good they'll contact you trust me.

              @popular_ruki Honestly "ruki" depends on if you're happy and satisfied with your work or if you're looking for the satisfaction of others. If you're looking for great reviews. They have a great plot and a good depiction of the characters. Make sure it's well written, and do a great job with the background description. But most importantly, don't put out a good book that you are unhappy with because that means your heart and soul weren't into writing it all. You'll probably never pick it up to read it after you've published it. I hope this helped you with your answer.

              Choka Hiiii choka... ouuf uhmmmmmmmmm, Okay so nice story line but it lacks energy, emotions Chapter 1,2,3 these are were to grab your readers not midway into the book, what i am saying is the beginning of the book is really boring, for someone who found himself in another body he was giving off a "too chill attitude" when I got deeper into the book I saw that it was interesting because any book on magic to me 70%(because I am not a complete nerd) interesting... but not many people who read will give a chance to a book when chapter 1-7 is just plain
              Let me tell you what my big sister told me when she read my book for the first time, she asked "if I was a robot" yup because my book sounded as if a robot that lacked human emotions and imaginations wrote it.... So when you are trying to portray when Mike is using his power again, imagine it, if it is beautiful and powerful enough then write it down( always imagine what you are writing coming to life or playing clearly in your head) I believe great stories come from great imaginations

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