I think what you're doing here, asking for other people's opinions while also being willing to try their stuff, is one big way to both get an estimate of where your quality is at and work on ways to improve it.

That said, I wanted to at least take a look at your story before dropping a link to my own, but as someone else mentioned, the inkstone link doesn't take me to it, and I haven't been able to figure out how the people who posted reviews of it were able to find it.

Anyway, since this does seem to have turned into a sharing thread, and you seem to be giving honest reviews (the best kind!), I thought I'd go ahead and give you mine:

https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-princesses-luna_24003223306376205

It involves five sister princesses in a world basically governed by the moon (and something is going wrong with the moon). The sisters fall across a decent spectrum of action princesses, with a shared sense of humor that has so far received positive reviews.

I only have about 20 chapters so far, but I plan on releasing on a MWF basis.

Rainbow420 be consistent, get to 50,000 words. Email Webnovel with your work. They’ll take some time to review it and get back to you. At least I’m pretty sure this is how it goes

i do that one and half month ago, they don't know to me. How many times they need in this review process?

    @Rainbow420 You don't necessarily have to get to 50,000 words. They reached out to me on Wattpad. I only had 3 chapters written. Then I was told I needed 12,000 words total. Once I reached the threshold. I submitted my then 9 chapters for the screening process. I should be hearing back from them sometime next month. Just put out quality work and be as authentic as possible. Be different from what most are doing. If your book is good they'll contact you trust me.

      @popular_ruki Honestly "ruki" depends on if you're happy and satisfied with your work or if you're looking for the satisfaction of others. If you're looking for great reviews. They have a great plot and a good depiction of the characters. Make sure it's well written, and do a great job with the background description. But most importantly, don't put out a good book that you are unhappy with because that means your heart and soul weren't into writing it all. You'll probably never pick it up to read it after you've published it. I hope this helped you with your answer.

      Choka Hiiii choka... ouuf uhmmmmmmmmm, Okay so nice story line but it lacks energy, emotions Chapter 1,2,3 these are were to grab your readers not midway into the book, what i am saying is the beginning of the book is really boring, for someone who found himself in another body he was giving off a "too chill attitude" when I got deeper into the book I saw that it was interesting because any book on magic to me 70%(because I am not a complete nerd) interesting... but not many people who read will give a chance to a book when chapter 1-7 is just plain
      Let me tell you what my big sister told me when she read my book for the first time, she asked "if I was a robot" yup because my book sounded as if a robot that lacked human emotions and imaginations wrote it.... So when you are trying to portray when Mike is using his power again, imagine it, if it is beautiful and powerful enough then write it down( always imagine what you are writing coming to life or playing clearly in your head) I believe great stories come from great imaginations

        popular_ruki I understand what you said, but isn't that the whole point? My mc is cold, so smart and a villain, and don't forget that he is 24. So he won't be jumping out of happiness cause he simply reincarnated no? People should know thatt this is not a 15 yo little kid who's naive and happy about everything right? Or else why would they start reading a cold, villain mc with high intelligence.

          Natay93 when my book goes to screening process, then how many chapters I published in an week.

            My friends make between 80 and 100 per hour on the internet... has been unemployed for 8 months, [US-05] but last month her income was 20,000 because she only worked 5 hours a day on her laptop.
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              @Rainbow420 At least 2 chapters a week so that the system can still find your work.

                popular_ruki

                The key to writing is to write something that you feel passionate about. Don't aim your priority towards what "sells", and let the words flow. Your first draft will be rough and need revising. But that's the point. Remember that criticism is meant to be a tool, and find confidence in your writing. Sometimes the most significant step you can make is releasing a chapter itself. Your audience will grow as you do. I'd love to read your story if you'd like an in-depth review.

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