Comment swap
Oystermouth Might be strange but thank you for reading in advance. https://www.webnovel.com/book/tale-of-the-demon-hero_24207507706053505. https://www.webnovel.com/book/tale-of-the-demon-ruler_24212683405791205 I wholeheartedly welcome any 'kinds' of review/s for this Books. Leave yours on the comment section and I will try to give MY HONEST (a bit brutal) thoughts/perspective/review to those after I updated my Book II. this week.
Hey! I'm interested in comment swap.
Customarily looked through the first few sentences and thought USMJ was interesting and decently written, I'll leave a review and those comments! Here's mine: https://www.webnovel.com/book/my-friend-a-deity_24230750106199505
Thank you for this! May we both find success.
Thriv_e I've left comments on yours. Its pretty nice, hope you keep writing!
Roth_Raven done! i hope you'll do mine as well
Zherie17 Hey! I am looking for people to read the content and comment like they would on a novel they enjoy.
Not really interested in getting or giving feedback on writing. So if thats your cup of tea let me know!
Account_nolonger done! Please remember to do mine as well
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cheshir Hey! I read your comments. Thanks for the feedback on writing stuff but I was just looking for someone to genuinely read and just comment as you would on a normal novel you might give a try, not feedback on stuff(?).
But I still appreciate feedback, so I will comment on more than 5 of your chapters, none of it will be feedback tho because I'm not looking for that or reviews.
edit: it turns out you only have 5 chapters out. But they are good.
I didn't mention it there cause I wanted to just enjoy the story and not make comments on writing, but the world description in the first few chapters did not stick well with me. If it is possible to cut some of it and adjust it into later chapters I think that will make the start more palatable for average webnovel readers.
Overall I think its good. Best of luck with writing it!
obiparadise_purity hey! I only read 4 of yours and commented on those, so its fine if you only comment on 4 of mine.
Oystermouth this is good advice, i shall take it and comment solely on the story in the future, then! Thank you for the comment on the opening desc, i certainly have a problem there, looking back.
Let's both keep on writing and improving!
Oystermouth I'm done too
