Hi, my name is Jeffrey Robert Palin Jr., Check out my novel. Please tell me what you think. Be brutally honest, I need the critiques.
The story is a Fiction titled Cyber-multiverse Milieu .
It is Fantasy and Science Fiction.
The story begins after the chapter called Author’s Notes. The Author’s Notes chapter is not necessary to read but I think it might help.
I’ll read as much of your story as you read of mine, mine is 12 Chapters.