Keongmas
Rin_Nurnia
Umm hello.
In the review you told me to improve my grammar...I just did released a new chapter...hope you see it and tell me in comments if there is any mistakes or not.
I really wanna improve.

    safa_bukhari but l have already reviewed ur story before and so l have added it in my library and voted for u... Is that okay??

      @Choka
      Done with paragraph comment and chapter comment (6 chp.)
      Plz give two power stone

        Hibah_Siddiqui I only said that for first day, I clearly mentioned that if you want, read the whole novel and give an honest review. And I'll give 2 ps for 3 days. I don't need some comments on each chapter. Check what I said if you don't believe me. I spoke about the review for today not comments.

          Choka
          😭 My bad! sorry i didn't understand what you say before. Ok... I'm on chapter 6 now, lets continue reading it tomorrow.πŸ˜…

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