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Then i'll start, here's my two novels, they're are both relatively short so i'd appreciate if you'd review both then i'll review yours. Collections, chapter and paragraph comments would be also appreciated.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/adventures-of-the-teen-heroes_24366874405934505
https://www.webnovel.com/book/behind-the-family-veil_24748640205711705