Then i'll start, here's my two novels, they're are both relatively short so i'd appreciate if you'd review both then i'll review yours. Collections, chapter and paragraph comments would be also appreciated.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/adventures-of-the-teen-heroes_24366874405934505
https://www.webnovel.com/book/behind-the-family-veil_24748640205711705

    NixOrtikal
    Hey, i think you reviewed and commented in the wrong novel but nevertheless thanks, i'll do yours now

      Bookmqe3 oh wow, it's not a prob, respond with the correct link for your book and I'll do the same for it

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