Please help me proof read my novel. It's a very good book but has some adjustments to make it perfect. I really want it to work out...please help me! https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/24503022806997205?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4322595594
I desperately need a proof reader
Hey there. I was actually reading through the forum posts regarding something till I came across your thread. The title was appealing enough to compel me to click on it; to which, I had no regrets on. If it wasn't for the fact I was already doing something, I might have been entranced enough by the synopsis alone to read through chapter one. My apologize for not being able to proofread it, but I did decide to make some alterations to the summary. It was more of a correction than anything. Feel free to use it (or don't). Up to you after all. Will say this, though, it definitely has potential!
Secrets have weight. The longer you keep them, the harder it gets to keep them moving. "Wrath of a Sister". To what extent will you go to save a sister whose world is about to crumble? All efforts to escape from a villain's clutches only get you deeper and deeper into them! Kristine and Rhea were sisters raised by the same parents. When Rhea's world was about to fall apart due to the plots of an evil ex-boyfriend, Kristine took it upon herself to delve into a long-standing grudge in order to stop a devil that was unleashed upon the world. On her rampant course to avenge her sister's demise, Kristine found out an inevitable truth about her true self that almost sent her world crumbling down. Now, what will both sisters do? Will they lay low as an evil villain disrupts their peaceful world or fight to cut down the root cause of all their miseries? Trouble finds us in different ways, but the way you handle it can either make it disappear or unravel a more dangerous outcome that is far worse. What will the sisters do to end it all for good?! Join me in this war of the Sanders sisters and find out how a pretty harmless flower became the deadliest poison in her course to save the ones she loves and holds dear.
AkitoTakahashi hey can you read my book?
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NobleRemmy I've already read Queen of Slaves. Albeit, I had to stop early because I noticed it wasn't being updated for awhile. No review was left, of course. I prefer to leave one until I've read through enough of it to. Also, let's not forget SoniiNaaz's concern!
AkitoTakahashi thanks a lot. I liked it.
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AkitoTakahashi don't worry, I can wait till it gets to my turn, until you finish with your other books. I would really appreciate your help at any time.
AkitoTakahashi thanks for reading my book dear, I am glad surely gonna upload more chapters