DeJeL Here's a review - you have so many text blocks, it's a pain to look at. Make your text more spread and reader-friendly.

      whe I admit that there are way too many near the beginning, but that's a plot feature, it's an autobiography written by a teen, It's ironed out a bit near end of chap 4 and beyond, did you read that far? and did you give a proper review (the thing where you give 1-5 stars for 5 things)?

          Olivia
          herokens

          Ahhh,didn't think of that , well if they're willing to be that shameless...................I will eventually review their books and well I have nothing to fear :smirk: so they should ready for honest reviews, all the way round. Plus do not fear, I'm sure my fellow readers will tear their novel apart if its that bad.

          Also authors do give your true opinions on each other, giving each other 5-stars won't work for ages cause eventually it will be worn down to its true rating when readers find it ,cause no book is 5-stars in everyone's eyes some will like it less than others.

                Kingoftheland Have you checked out mine? (listed above) And what is your book so we can also review it if we like.;,;.

                    Olivia Only want good reviews? How are you so sure? And you are 'pretty sure'at that?
                    Perhaps you misread the thread title as 'give a 5 star review and get a 5 star review'? Let me clarify it for you, the title reads 'Review swap', meaning we read each other's books and give our review, as a form of support and encouragement. And that is because it is difficult for new and unknown writers to get their story noticed in the ever increasing mountain of stories here.
                    And not everyone is active on facebook, if you didn't know that. So there is a chance many of us dont know about the promotional events there. And even if we do know about that, why cant we make a thread here to do so ourselves. I don't see any rules stating against doing that.
                    You don't need to support everyone here, but you don't have to diss them either.

                    Forgive me if I took unnecessary offence to your statement but I had to say it. Maybe the smiley at the end was to blame.
                    Forget it, maybe I woke up on the wrong side of bed.

                        Willing to exchange feedback.

                        Title : Transcending Fate

                        Synopsis :
                        In the Eight Immortal Realms, all creatures are born with a spirit core.
                        In humans, the spirit core houses a soul spirit - an entity that gives its host power and strength.
                        Throughout the ages, legendary soul spirits have appeared, causing those in eight realms to tremble beneath them.
                        A prince cursed by the heavens is reincarnated into the universe of the Eight Immortal Realms, a universe full of magical creatures, martial arts, and magic.
                        Alongside his unique soul spirit, the prince sets out on a journey to defy the heavens and transcend his fate.

                        Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/10513427305051805/Transcending-Fate

                          KCChakry
                          oh, sorry for that >_<.
                          Yes, I did read it as 'give a 5-star review and get a 5-star review'. Thank you for the clarification :)
                          so it is more like feedback on how to improve than reviews?

                          KCChakry Forgive me if I took unnecessary offence to your statement but I had to say it. Maybe the smiley at the end was to blame.
                          Forget it, maybe I woke up on the wrong side of bed.

                          I understand and I do appreciate the clarification :) hugs?

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