Hi I took a quick glace at your novel.
Only read 3 sentences, but found a few concerns.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1: A dedication.- Remove Chapter one from your title name so it does not repeat. I looks lazy/unprofessional and is really easy to fix.
If not everyone, most of the people on Earth have a goal in their life. Some want money. Some want power.
This could be changed into something more concise, something like below. This if was not written like the above for a certain reason, it is needlessly wordy.
Most people have a goal in their life, often times it is money or power.
If your trying to boost word count consider reading this https://www.webnovel.com/book/12188725105057605/The-Dao-of-Filler
When I read that line it came of as preachy, is there a reason you did not start of with story?
From your synopsis I could tell the direction of your story, but not what kind of story will it be. It gives me a sense of adventure, but I think you need to expand on it a bit more.
I cannot tell how your MC feels about anything, as of now she seems hollow?
With reading so little all I can say about your good points is your grammar is very clear, and I had no issues reading it.
I'm scared to invest more time, into reading your novel as of now if you go into good detail on my Synopsis, I would keep going.