IvoryDragon Checked out your book. It has a nice beginning.
If you have time, do read mine too.
Title: The Archaic Elements
Avis realm- a space sealed in time.
Here, Cultivators shatter the Shackles which bind their Mortal Soul from reaching the Divine.
Ten shackles to Divinity remains the destination …..Yet no one has ever succeeded in a Millennia.
In this world dominated by strength drifts a kid who has no idea of where his journey leads.
Neither is he aware of the truth regarding his ORIGIN.