I remembered I reviewed your novel long ago, you seem to be making a real effort Good on you.
Forsaken123 Thanks. I hope I have reviewed yours back.
Btw, which contest have you participated in?
Forsaken123 Sure! But since there's only five chapters, can I read all of the chapters first before giving a review? May I ask, What contest are you in? I'm in one too....
No, I only reviewed your synopsis, so you where not meant to.
<-- I ripped you apart for having grammar errors. Its a contest with Clowniac, but I'm cheating and only posting 1 chapter a day. =[
Sure, but please do not leave a review on the novels page =].
The more effort you put in the more I learn from you =].
Forsaken123 Okay, so are you saying that I should not review your novel but only comment beneath every chapter?
By the way, could you read mine and tell me what you think? Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12618622806175005/Vice-Versa
Hi. Wondering if anyone can give my story a quick review. I'm willing to read and swap reviews. Would love honest reviews. If you think it's crap let me know so I can improve it. As beginning writers sometimes we get so emerged in our stories and characters that we can't see where we could make improvements or changes.
It's a love story so if romance isn't your thing you won't like it. Thanks.
Dropped you a review! Please review mine if you have the time!
Overall, you paced your story really well, and it makes me want to read more! My one critique would be that there are minor grammar errors all over, but it doesn't stop me from enjoying the story, so it honestly isn't that big of a deal.
You can make a google/doc or just leave it here. commenting is good 2.
Are you sure? I will have you know I'm ruthless.
From my impression on your synopsis and title you will not be getting 5 stars.
Very well, I will go ham on ur novel. I hope you will do the same.
Forsaken123 Okay! I'll get to it.
Forsaken123 Sure. I want to improve after all..
Let me know if you viewed/ it I would never share my evil heart with the world.
Forsaken123 Yeah, I'm looking at it now...and thanks for your time. I'll send you the link tomorrow because it's late for me and I'm half asleep right now.
No problem, I understand that type of review is not easy to see.
Sorry if I was cruel, I want you to improve. =] Good-luck.
Forsaken123 No it's fine. You saw something that me, nor others did, so I'm totally grateful.
Forsaken123 Here's the link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Qy13tDkSJWa2QRSQQMlU6KqJniSqD6HkOpcfpqJdfe0/edit?usp=sharing
Sorry I took so long.
Anyone need a review swap? I'd love it if someone could comment on my novel (pretty please)
Currently have 9 chapters out.
littlehera I'll do it~! And in exchange, could you tell me what's wrong with my title and synopsis? Novel link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12618622806175005/Vice-Versa
My pen name is Nightmare_Taichou
Thanks in advance.
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