Hi @AwesomeSingularity !
I'll post my feedback on your Synopsis and title here, and my feedback on your novel in the novel page.
Since you've specifically asked for help about your synopsis and title, I will comply. However, I'm bad with tact so I'll be as blunt as possible. Apologies for the harshness.
I'll start with the synopsis.
The theme of your novel is quite clear in your synopsis. However, if you're planning on revising your synopsis, I suggest focusing on the DETAILS. Highlight and provide the details that make your story unique, and do away with the details that come off as a little bit extra.
For example, you've mentioned that one of the Tachibana Yuri's is a prince, and the other is an ordinary student. In your synopsis, you've mentioned it twice. Same is true with other details in the synopsis. What I get from your synopsis is as follows:
- Tachibana Yuri. An ordinary calm boy who loves Karate and lives in the peaceful country of Japan, located in Earth - the third Planet in the Milky Way Galaxy.
- Yuri Tachibana. The third Prince of Saishi who is cons