DeJeL uh still on CH 3 of yours. I stopped reading it last night. I'll tell you the reason later.
SnoozySloth I'm done reviewing yours.
HAS SPOILERS, I GUESS?
The story made me read it fast because it keeps on adding my curiosity. So I didn't bother looking for grammar and spelling errors.
Stability of updates: excellent. 5 CH now in a period of 5-6 days?
Story development: the MC just started to develop his abilities, couldn't say more since it's only starting.
Character design: like what some people on the comment said, mc is somehow like deku. A bullied kid>got powers>his bully came with him on the academy>they will become enemies.
Fun Prediction: they're going to be friends in the future?
I still like the MC tho, got a good impression of him. I like that he's into inventing. The vibes he gave me is kinda like deku of hero academia/ a bit Dean of dark king / and a bit Edward elric?
World background: the world after apocalypse + steam punk era. Deserves 5/5 for me.
Suggestions? No suggestions haha. Just keep doing this and don't drop it if possible.
Added in my library