SnoozySloth Thank you.;,;. As far as the first 3.5 chapters, the writing style is a plot feature, not something that I will correct... however, I know that I sometimes fail in tenses and punctuation... in that regard, I just need assistance in pointing out my mistakes.;,;.
Is updating weekly on a regular basis good enough, if not then I would be marked down here.;,;. even though my schedule specifically states weekly.;,;.
thank you, I love to hear that.;,;.
I would honestly like some help here... I'm not that good at making nor incorporating such details... but would love to do so.;,;.
Thank you... I really try to explain where they are in as much detail as I know how.
I understand that my first few chapters will turn readers away... but as another, that reviewed my novel said, "Your novel chooses its readers, rather than the readers choosing it." And that is honestly what I want.;,;. I feel that readers that stick it until chapter 6+ will likely stick through till the end, whereas readers that drop before they even read chapter 5 are not really the ones this novel is targeting anyway.;,;.