DragonKnight531 never give up, no one in the world gets their stuff right the first time. Even the authors of the most popular novels on Webnovel needed to practice and prepare a bit before they could become so famous.
I (and I hope everyone here) use my self-deprecation as incouragment for me to improve myself( Although I don’t improve at all T-T) and I take some time to practice. It isn’t that your novel isn’t good, it’s just that you don’t have much practice yet since you’ve only posted 5 chapters, but with time, confidence(and/or no confidence), and the friends you have all around you, I believe you and everyone here can improved themselves by leaps and bounds.