I'm needing a review and constructive criticism on my writing and what I can improve on since I do wanna get better. In return just let me know what story you want me to do a review on and I will! The name of the story is True God, It so far has 9 chapters I believe. I'm mainly just using it to improve my overall writing before I do some big boy stuff here is the synopsis
Experiencing the life of mortals by creating my own and learning from them. Will I be a graceful and forgiving god? Or will I rule my creations with an iron fist!
Join and see the grand adventures I will partake in the world's of my own creation!