Ruen
I reviewed your novel. Feel free to review either of mine. The chapters are long so if you don't like mine just read 5 chapters =p
Steampunk Apocalypse!
Uniform System
Here's a copy of my review (Note: I rated 5/5 despite the scoring in the actual review):
This novel reminds me of Desolate Era. It's too early to say for sure what it will be like though.
Writing Quality 4/5: There are some mistakes in each chapter that stand out. Usually misspelled words. Or using 'the' instead of 'they'. It hurts the flow a little, but it's not bad.
Updates: 5/5? Not sure how long this novel has been around for since I just read it.
Story Development: 4/5. There's a story... but I had a hard time following the prologue. Too much going on with too many unexplained concepts being introduced. I feel like you need a strong background in having read chinese webnovels to understand it. However, the story quickly improved as it went. Each chapter was clearly better than the previous one.
Character design: 3/5: I haven't really seen much character design yet. Characters in the prologue are barely described so I can't imagine them, I imagine this will improve once a few chapters past the prologue develop.
World Background: 4.5/5. I see a lot of potential here. I'd like to see something on the scale of Desolate Era develop.
Final thoughts for the author: I think the prologue is hurting your story more than helping it. Take that with a grain of salt though. It's a little early to make big judgement calls like that.
I saw your reply to Fro_Nekota's review. You specified in your reply:
'The main purpose of the prologue was to give the mc strong opponents by the mass resurrection of powerful souls.'
My recommendation: Do the mass resurrection without the prologue. Then we get to follow the protagonist journey as he discovers the mystery behind why all these powerful souls resurrected.