Is there anyone for review exchange?
CONSULT MY NEW BOOK "Return from the 7 hells after a hundred thousand years".
https://www.webnovel.com/book/return-of-the-7-hells-after-one-hundred-thousand-years_25059631705728405
EXCHANGE OF VIEWS
Is it possible to give do the same with a novel from another plateform? (Views and comments/review)
Junni_MC Well, I am up.
DamnedChicken hello you can read my novel and give your sincere opinion no matter if it is a harsh review
Junni_MC Then I hope for the same. Give me an honest review.
Junni_MC My novel is called The Looming Death.
DamnedChicken send the link that does not appear
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Junni_MC I did review your book. And it was honestly pretty good. The story was entertaining. The only problem is your writing format. You yourself don't know what style you want to write your story in. I think you should write in omniscient pov, from what I have read.
You should search for it and learn how to use it. The structuring needs work too, along with minor grammatical errors.
Junni_MC can you elaborate on my mistakes?
DamnedChicken the story is good, but I think it lacks something from my point of view I feel it lacks a factor that makes me hooked to the reading and makes me get into the story. otherwise all good
Junni_MC Hmmm. Ok thanks for your help.
I’ll review it if you review mine! It’s called Obsessive over You
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/25145247905021805?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4323204632
Zaria_Tudor ready I checked it and added it to collections
Junni_MC I’ve added yours as well