Hi all! I'm looking to get feedback on my novel to learn how to make my content more interesting for the readers.

In return, I will read your novel and give you feedback. I'll most likely give you a high review as well if I see something I like or just general potential in your writing. I'm also learning a lot by seeing what other successful authors are doing, so I'd be happy to check your novel out!

Here is a link to mine: https://www.webnovel.com/book/life-reader_25308161106785605

Be brutally honest here in the comments, and still honest but maybe less brutal in the review section lol. I look forward to reading your story!

    TallyArtist I left a power stone and tomorrow I will leave the review as I am editing a chapter.

        TallyArtist I think the prologue is good. It would need more spice to make it better (room for improvement) but it sets the tone to the story which is good. You tend to use a lot Kaiden's name to start your paragraph, maybe take note on that too. (Idk, personally the comedy points for me didn't get to me though, *he runs to stay at the center before the exam and the rules of confusion/distraction) but that might just be me).

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