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"Congratulations, Master! As your disciples, we will give my best to uphold the glory of our sect with our lives!’ Zhang Ergou and Feng Bujue knelt after glancing at each other.

(we will give our best)

"Congratulations, Master! As your disciples, we will give our best to uphold the glory of our sect with our lives!’ Zhang Ergou and Feng Bujue knelt after glancing at each other.

144

"Cai yi…I’m afraid the Chu Family will not just sit about idly."

(Cai Yi instead of Cai yi)

"Cai Yi…I’m afraid the Chu Family will not just sit about idly."

147

"Take extra caution tomorrow. Do not let any f your brothers come to harm."

(of instead of f)

"Take extra caution tomorrow. Do not let any of your brothers come to harm."

147

Just then, a few gigantic arks flew towards them in the skies. Members of the six sects looked at as though they were nothing abnormal.

Just then, a few gigantic arks flew towards them in the skies. Members of the six sects looked as though they were nothing abnormal.

148

They had realized that the beast was in a perfect condition at all, without any hint of being any weaker.

(after all)

They had realized that the beast was in a perfect condition after all, without any hint of being any weaker.

149

"Elder, should we give them a hand and distract away the Snow Lion?" A disciple asked.

(flow better with distract the Snow Lion away IMO)

"Elder, should we give them a hand and distract the Snow Lion away?" A disciple asked.

153

Fengtian Sect’s Elder was onboard the ark all along. Towards such mortal affairs, he had no interest at all.

(alone not along)

Fengtian Sect’s Elder was onboard the ark all alone. Towards such mortal affairs, he had no interest at all.

154

That fart had nearly caused the entire Glory Sect to be wiped out.

(make more sense with something like squat, team, crew, party)

That fart had nearly caused the entire Glory Sect squad to be wiped out.

156

A silent aura filled the entire surroundings, an aura so repressive that theFengtian Sect disciples could hardly breathe.

(spacing error)

A silent aura filled the entire surroundings, an aura so repressive that the Fengtian Sect disciples could hardly breathe.

bump so that it can be fixed