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I’ll read yours and leave feedback in a review if you do mine?

My novel is: http://wbnv.in/a/91hZ7Db I’m a new author as well

The book is very good so far, I can’t fault it much. The only thing I’d say for criticism is you sometimes follow up on a film stop with a short sentence explaining the prior one. This throws the reading flow off a little bit, I would try to maybe include the description/explanation in the original sentence, but in a discreet way so it’s not so blunt

Alright bro I am in
Here is my novel link -
https://m.webnovel.com/book/pokemon-nexus_25918245206617005

Hello, I would love to hear your thoughts for my novel "LOVE OR TRUTH."
Here's the link...check it out
https://www.webnovel.com/book/love-or-truth_21147980906568005