Can someone provide me with some comparative feedbacks between my first and the lastets chapter??
Beyond The Unknowns
http://wbnv.in/a/ffhfmsT
Need honest feedback
About to read it now.
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TheWriter117 Saw your review. Thank you for your time.
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NPCs Saw your review. There seems to be some confusion. The MC cannot see the future. Neither the novel has reached any climax.
Can you please remove these two parts?
I am ok with the suggestions and areas of development.
TheWriter117 By the way, just saying this for your own benefit, no malice intended. I saw in one of the threads that if you give too many reviews of less than 3 stars, Webnovel doesn't allow you to review stories later on.
Might be wrong. But check once.
Never heard of it but I actually gave a few 3 stars reviews. When I read novels, I'm not skimming it, I'm really reading it so I can give a valid review. It's why my reviews are longer and more detailed when compared to the reviews I have seen in most stories I have read here. Also noted, thank you
TheWriter117 Cool. Then might be wrong.
Grandmasters Have reviewed yours. Please check.
As honest feedback, the information dump in the first chapter is too heavy (at least for me).
5 days later
RomanceFanatic028 I would like to really thank you for your feedback. It was most helpful, especially regarding the commas. I have edited all my chapters accordingly.
Thank you once again.