Flattened_Rice_007 I already read the chapter and left a comment. Also, I didn't wanna say this in the comments so that it doesn't affect your fan base. You didn't explain where Luan learned to fight. Turning improved his senses but he would need experience to fight without getting hit.

    vasuki_king Done with your 10 chapters. Enjoyed reading your book. Kindly go through my 8 chapters now.
    Also, for any honest feedback let me know here.

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