OnikunStudios Done your book was captivating i didn't notice when i reach in 4 ch here is mine
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-silent-caster's-journey:-and-his-tale-with-the-abandoned-witch._26627555006962505
Chapter and peragraph comment sawp
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Demi9000 done
Here is mine https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-silent-caster's-journey:-and-his-tale-with-the-abandoned-witch._26627555006962505
I will give review after reading it whol.
It intresting
ATOMIC_MOON Done
Perfect_praize
https://www.webnovel.com/book/mutation-frenzy_25171143206343705
Can you give my novel a read? I would love to head over to your novel. Thanks
Evil_Avatar
Okay done
Drop a review, paragraph comments and collection, I have done same for yours
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/26299251606914605?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4324227044
ATOMIC_MOON Done with yours. Here's mine https://www.webnovel.com/book/find-me-in-another-place-and-time_25876557905228005###
De_Prodigy Done yours. Here's mine https://www.webnovel.com/book/find-me-in-another-place-and-time_25876557905228005###
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I'm down! Here is my novel, it's about 2k words each chapter. Since you only have one chapter, feel free to stop on my first chapter too.
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/26736630905058805?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4316826855
Perfect_praize Done. Here's the link to my book https://www.webnovel.com/book/find-me-in-another-place-and-time_25876557905228005###
Noah_Heridia I'll do yours tomorrow! Please wait till that!
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ATOMIC_MOON If you send me a Google doc or something similar of your first chapter, I can go through it and give a detailed review. It's kinda hard to make suggestions on Webnovel.
If you want to send me the doc, my discord is foxner_
Noah_Heridia Can I do that too?
De_Prodigy I might create a post for this. IDK, I don't have much time to go through a bunch of novels and leave detailed reviews for each. I had to do that in my creative writing class and it took ages to get through all of my classmates' writing. You can paste the link to your novel if you want here and I'll check it out. No promises that I will give you a detailed review though.
Noah_Heridia of coursece will do you gave me permission
.anyway
To your novel i think if youbcan describe how blood is dripping from body it woud be more impact full
Like that alley part where a man body was .
You can descibe how the blood was drpping fron his Injuries
ATOMIC_MOON Sure! I'm up for it! http://wbnv.in/a/3ahkRbs