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I've been writing for some time now and I want to know if my overall writing style is good or if it needs to be improve, my books name is (The Guide Of Evolution), leave suggestions on the chapters that need improvement that would be helpful thanks.
And if you wanna do a review swap all you have to do is leave your novels name or the link to your novel and again my books name is (The Guide Of Evolution).

I'd would appreciate any feedback you have https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-twenty-seventh-sin_26857321706737705
I'm new to wrighting so if you like it let me know, if not let me know why and I'll take a look at yours

ok i will

you have allot of errors but its only minor so don't worry

Thanks