Yukina_Miu Sure! I'd love to! Although it will depend whether or not I'll be able to do it today or not. If its less than 3 chapters, I'll go ahead... cause I am honestly pretty tired, it's like 3 AM here.

Though to make up for it, I'll and it to my collection and hand ya a power stone. I'll be reading it tomorrow. Mine is up above otherwise!

    Mystic_Chronicler Bro was cooking when man's wrote that book. Anyone that sees this, give this book a read. It is hella fucking good and makes me slightly envious. Like man my vocabulary is horrible.

    And to you man, good luck on your story dude! Keep it up!

      Elusive_Toutawoo It's OK whenever you have spare time. I made some edits according to your advice and some other kind advice I received through comments. In ch 1 I added the extra scene we discussed, and in another comment was proposed to reduce the length of some sentences and paragraphs to make them easier to read. So I did reduce the length, and for one chapter, I divided it into two smaller chapters to reduce the chapter length. I hope I'm making progress. I'm looking forward to your comments. Thank you. 😁😁😁

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