Mystic_Chronicler Bro was cooking when man's wrote that book. Anyone that sees this, give this book a read. It is hella fucking good and makes me slightly envious. Like man my vocabulary is horrible.

And to you man, good luck on your story dude! Keep it up!

      Elusive_Toutawoo It's OK whenever you have spare time. I made some edits according to your advice and some other kind advice I received through comments. In ch 1 I added the extra scene we discussed, and in another comment was proposed to reduce the length of some sentences and paragraphs to make them easier to read. So I did reduce the length, and for one chapter, I divided it into two smaller chapters to reduce the chapter length. I hope I'm making progress. I'm looking forward to your comments. Thank you. 😁😁😁

          Hi, I’m a new author and I’m looking for some constructive feedback on my novel. It’s called “Mystery in the Whispering Grove” and it’s a fantasy novel with a hint of adventure, action, mystery, and romance.
          It’s about Aria and Theo, two chosen Keepers who have to master the elemental powers of Earth, Air, Water, and Fire to protect the ancient Whispering Grove from a dark threat. Along the way, they discover the secrets of light and shadow, truth and illusion, and their own destiny.
          If you enjoy stories with magic, mystery, and some adventure, you’ll love this novel. And if you don’t, I’d still value your opinion on how I can improve my writing style and craft a better story.
          You can read my novel here:
          https://www.webnovel.com/book/mystery-of-the-whispering-grove_27706412300716305

          Please read it and let me know what you think.
          Thank you for your time and support. I look forward to hearing from you soon. 😊

            5 days later
            Web Novel Novel Ask